Sunday, March 31, 2013

You Are Someone (We Love) Comments

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A drop of tears
Flood all over the world
And we cant run but drown
Because we stuck in a time
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Unwritten Soul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 September 2017

This poem is strong in making ourselves one on tagging with love and affection above caste, creed and religion. We shoud be grown from seeds to trees. Dear madam you have so nicely inscribed this here. Let it be quoted... There always time for any seeds grow be trees Life sound be same not by revolution Change for chances New brave hearts Thanks for sharing.

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Mj Lemon 11 June 2017

Soul, this is brilliant. This makes me wonder how much more value there would be given by a person if that person were well treated as a fledgling being in this world. Sometimes that single tear can be as powerful as entire ocean. These words of your will last, Soul. A great poem.

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Unwritten Soul 12 June 2017

Another but not last thank you for you :) I know dear we are just human that sometimes feel lost, and its okay to fall...its not rare but common...i wish i could bring everyone happy and be fine with what life goes with us so far, past is never returned but future is always promising...if we believe, if we believe :)

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Simone Inez Harriman 04 December 2016

The value of self can take a lifetime to achieve and for some sadly not at all. Self worth gets a huge step up in life if we are loved and nurtured as children. I love your poem Soul...just beautiful! ...10

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Unwritten Soul 05 December 2016

Its been such a while not hear anything from you, thanks for your words again at least i know you are doing fine..Thanks for your encouraging words also..it is much appreciated dear Simone, stay happy and well...have a white holiday season there :) :) stay smile

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 June 2016

Will we survive? Yes! We will survive with positive works. Thanks for sharing.

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Heather Wilkins 25 July 2013

how can we love others if we do not love ourselves.? a wonderful powerful poem.

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Captain Cur 01 May 2013

Your poems and prose are both powerful and send a clear strong message. If we love ourselves as we are, it does not matter what others think of us, because our core value is intact and impenetrable.

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Shadow Girl 12 April 2013

Beautiful lil soul xxx

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Xelam Kan™ 11 April 2013

hats off.... for notes, not for poem your prose is more powerfull than your verse.... refine it....

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Nader Baheri 04 April 2013

great poem just like as ever dear soul. this poem is telling the right tacts but let me add sth to it. sure its not true to be some one else but we may desire to take some one's position or what he or she has gained through his/her life.even to be better than them.it doesnt mean desire to be someone else, does it? I raise a question here. If we dont push ourselves how would we improve? kudos(hahah yes it s a chocolate for me, i swallowed it) ~nb

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Paul Brookes 03 April 2013

Just be yourself which you truly are Soul Loved it thanks for sharing. BB : O)

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Neela Nath Das 03 April 2013

One of the best poems from your pen. I enjoyed it very much, Soul.

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Jinal Oswal 03 April 2013

Hi Soul, hope you doing great. Reading the poem I think you are doing wonderful. A real great thought shared by you. Wonderfully conveyed. Your pen just strikes the right chords. Keep up the good work.

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Valsa George 02 April 2013

Yes, we can be Captains to sail at will! Weare the navigators of our own life! We never grow by pining to be someone else. Great thoughts beautifully expressed!

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Frank James Davis 02 April 2013

A lovely inspiration, Soul.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 02 April 2013

its important for all of us to be ourselves and make our own futures. Make our way. Our ideas will be shown to the future. We have unique opinions and souls but sometimes there is no chance. Well done Nice one

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 02 April 2013

its important for all of us to be ourselves and make our own futures. Make our way. Our ideas will be shown to the future. We have unique opinions and souls but sometimes there is no chance. Well done Nice one

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Valerie Dohren 31 March 2013

As Shakespeare said To thine own self be true - great philosophy Soul, and beautifully expressed in your poem.

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