Wednesday, August 22, 2012

You Are Reality... Comments

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you are reality, as well as dream
you are a river
as well as thirst
you are restlessness of heart
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sagar patil.
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Poetheart Morgan 24 August 2012

but what love is this? cause envy cause pain! worth fight for your love! superbe! ! ! !

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Leena Sharma 24 August 2012

Simply written with simple gestures..... thank you for the new style......

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Unwritten Soul 23 August 2012

Beautiful poem, so i am really understand why it so beautiful...sweet write, thanks for your invite... but i remember one poet told me if we not use r to replace are,2 as to...the poem will be better :) such a good write keep it up_Unwritten Soul

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Neela Nath Das 23 August 2012

Hmm, Sagar.Very nice poem, utterly wrapped with romantic air. Loved it.

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sagar patil.

maharashtra, india
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