Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Monday, March 10, 2014

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“No, you can not do” I held his hand
Brother was forced not to view it by father
Some of the legal papers
Which were kept in locked drawer?
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 March 2014

Love matters as bond in family; but money batters peace as and when we wear the garb of ABEL and CAIN of the Bible. P Nasarudheen, Kasargod..KeraLa Mar 11,2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 March 2014

In this fully materialistic world, even love is counted on money-basis. Relationships do not have much value. Your poem points out at the necessity of having a value oriented life UK Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur, Kannur 670307 Mar 11,2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 March 2014

Great Jessica Sikora3 hours ago Nicely done

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 March 2014

nice Anna Laurencio17 minutes ago well written Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 March 2014

Good Aaron Avila19 minutes ago Emotional, but flow is a bit strained

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Chuy Amante 10 March 2014

Very nice, the eternal family drama... it just IS namaste

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 March 2014

Like 5 minutes ago by ryan lawley | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 March 2014

“No, you can not do” I held his hand Brother was forced not to view it by father

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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