The moment you were born, you announced
Your arrival in our family, screaming out loud
Now that I am here, attention is my birth right.
Of course, we catered to you day and night.
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Lovely poem.mamta, of daughter mother relationship, i thoroughly enjoyed it! ............. (have you ever thought of the unborn daughters? ? ? Time permitting, plz go through 'Foetus' composed by me)
mamtaji, you poems are powerful for their directness......you never complain.... your words, they have a specific place in the mind of a reader....after reading almost all your poems, i still follow you to enjoy the open mind of yours.........
You have presented a slice of real life from the family album, - where all the characters once again enact those scenes from the past, ..... their sounds echo through the corridors of memory! It all seems like yeasterday! Yet how fast time flies! We must go through life playing our parts! The Koran says that life is but a comfort illusions! - Raj Nandy
A poem honest to the core...beautifully eloquent...it just speaks out the poet's heart...I can relate to your mixed feelings here, Mamta...love and affection contribute high towards the biggest compromises in life...10+
Beauty & eloquence define this fine tribute to a Mother's unwavered love for her Daughter....A most impressive expression of blood-passion. ~ F j R ~ __2008__
Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem.I have a little daughter, and my darling and I are still in the part where I feel drained by sun down.After reading your poem, I'm looking forward eagerly to the other phases, (though all of them seem to be equally challenging.)