Wednesday, July 6, 2016

You Are On Eternal Chariot Comments

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I am riding the mortal car
I have to leave this one day
I know there is change ever
This change is for rebirth.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Pushpendra Patel 26 February 2019

God is in eternal Chariot. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you area nice poet.

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 July 2016

Is for rebirth! ! Nice work.

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M Asim Nehal 08 July 2016

Awesome metaphor A Car for life is amusing, indeed we have rented our body for our soul to drive our life in this world.10+++++

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Rajnish Manga 06 July 2016

Thanks for sharing this great philosophical poem involving our physical and metaphysical phases of life. Great expression.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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