Wednesday, November 7, 2007

You Are Not Comments

Rating: 2.9

you are not the seconds and minutes and hours of things
or the days and weeks and months and years of things
or whatever to me love could or should be to you the very center
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Andrew James
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Original Unknown Girl 16 November 2007

Sigh..... has a kind of Neruda quality about it... v. romantic! HG: -) xx

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Tan Morgan 08 November 2007

This is wonderful! You clearly had an inspiring muse for this one.

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Agnes Török 08 November 2007

Oh, how beautiful! You are truly a poet, and that is not an easy thing to be. You are the owner of the very words you use, and by owning them you are their master and they will fallow every movement of your fingertips. These words will bend under your writing streanght and become what you want them to be. In your hands, words will come alive. You are a true poet. Thank you for sharing. All my best Agnes

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