Sunday, June 7, 2009

You Are Not There Comments

Rating: 5.0

There will always be places and people to remind me of you
And your family are still mine though life goes on without you
Sometimes though it still feels like it was just a nightmare
And then I open my eyes only to find, still you are not there
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Fay Slimm 08 June 2009

We all know what is said about 'time' healing - - hhmmm I wonder though - - this is a wistful yet hopeful verse - - and it deserves all the tens 10 + + + Fay..xx

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Laurie Hill 07 June 2009

A very sad and wistful work, looking for a peace of the heart...10+

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Fiona Davidson 07 June 2009

Excellent poem Tia...the right time is just waiting for you...Fi 10+++

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Craig Turner 07 June 2009

This is well written and quite traditionally so, in the good way as in universal, well done enjoyed it xxx

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Sue Sie 07 June 2009

Lovely poem Tia....I hope you find what you are looking for and what your heart needs...10 Sue

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