Thursday, July 1, 2010

You Are Not The Person I Met The First Time Comments

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From the depth of my heart, truth be told, I can feel the fear
What do I....to bring my head out of this water?
Where can my feet go?
Be it this rubble around me, that I shall arise?
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David Beckham
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Kevin Carney 12 September 2010

What a sad poem, you build the emmotions through sincerity. So I much I see and feel in your words. Nice write.

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Haydee Lo 09 July 2010

wow...im lost for words..i can feel the poem..i can feel every words youve said..thanks for the comment too..such a great poem

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Catrina Heart 03 July 2010

wow what a pain, what a poetic soliloquy you have made...very nice indeed...Thanks!

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