Thursday, June 4, 2009

You Are Not Alone....... Comments

Rating: 5.0

If you sit alone, hair opened to winds unfair;
If you are shell-enclosed, no one to care;
If water had blown your sand castle away;
The mistakes and retakes, don't matter today.
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Angelic(Annie) Female
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Ashwin Alex 03 July 2011

Good use of words, conveying an excellent theme! Good work!

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Alen Alexander 11 June 2009

nice write..... good

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Brishti Mazumdar 05 June 2009

Don't drench your self alone in the rain; She can take away memories of your pain. wonderful these lines are....10+ for them...Brishti Mazumdar

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Aarif Ameen 04 June 2009

good 10+ love it take care

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