You Are My World Comments

Thanks for sharing this poem. I enjoyed this poem 10+++++

They tend to lift the curtains, Of age-old infatuation For being in your arms. For being in your charms. Wow, lovely poem shared. 10+++

They tend to lift the curtains, Of age-old infatuation For being in your arms. For being in your charms. Lovely sharing. 10+++

The intensity of love has been brilliantly depicted through a precise few words..! A very nice creation..! I loved the piece..! !

A nicely penned poem, quite enjoyable. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem.

One year has passed since I read it first on you page. Happy anneversary.

They tend to lift the curtains, Of age-old infatuation For being in your arms. For being in your charms. For being a part of The air you breathe into, The water you bathe in, The road you walk on, The bed you rest upon, Wow. What a beautiful poem! 10+ for sharing it with us.

Beyond the reach of my eyes! ! Nice work.

For being a part of The air you breathe into, The water you bathe in, The road you walk on, The bed you rest upon, The world you dwell within, The dream you cherish of, The desire you burn with, The aspirations you foster And everything that you feel Closer, Cozier and coveted. A very nice poem on love. 10 marks for it. Thanks for sharing.

'As I look at the horizon Beyond the reach of my eyes, Your fading memories Zoom in instantly Into a gigantic black hole Emerging out of nowhere' totally absorbed already wonderful