You Are My World........ Comments

nice, nice. good style, goodmood

By Jove! You did yet again in groundbreaking style. ummmmm.. it's amazing.... you are my feeling. you are my Silence. you are my breathe. You are my world...... Yippee! I like these line of the poem very much. I wonder who is' you'. Thumps up to the poetess

Wonderful tribute to the person in reference who inspires you. Written simply but passionately with true feeling. Good work enjoyed reading.