You Are My Whole World Comments

a beautiful poem indeed...again a delightful write from a delightful person thanks for sharing, payal

Such a pleasing poem in original touch, so nice and blooming heart... You are like god to me even though i feel this is a great poem, comparing to god make me feel not comfy when you laugh, the whole universe laughs wow look at this line please dont let the one you saying here laugh because if we got one laugh, the whole universe laugh at same time, it can shake the space with hahahahahaha and then we will trouble....the energy of hahaaha will shake the world, the universe quake .. :) Joking! _Unwritten Soul

Words have simply poured out from the heart.

Awwww I love this poem! ! It made my top 5 poems.

Very nicely you expressed the feelings of a lover for his ladylove!

Speechless. Are you sure that you have only 22? ? ? I don't know! you bring to me remembers....Just a feeling! ! ! Beautiful! ! ! !