You Are My Sunshine Comments

And gently cupped your features, Ran raptured gilded fingers Over your cloudless form And through your burnished hair. Rachel Ann Butler

A really great piece Kevin,10/10 regards Tom

Kevin, I rate this your best to date, in fact I am taking this with me, to my favourites. It is extremely well put together, for reading and narrative, in fact you show your talent openly in this piece. the imagery is superb. thank you for posting this one. 10 + + + + +from Fay

WOW! ! ! ! ....i mean wow! ! ! ! that was absolutely beautiful! ! ! !