Monday, July 2, 2012

You Are My Sunrise Comments

Rating: 4.9

The sun is smiling as I open my eyes
Birds serenading the awoken sky.
I watch from my window the sun climbing a hill
Spreading its glimmer so beautiful.
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Theo Williams
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Alicia Meyers 03 August 2012

If I heard those exact words from a guy I like, I would be his forever. Such beautiful words used in this writing. :)

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Nurain Ali-balogun 05 July 2012

Vividly imaginative in a simple, yet mildly complex way. I love it.

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Hasan Ismail 03 July 2012

a great romance love it

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Swati Kukreti 03 July 2012

nice effort and quite vivvid imagination...Keep it Up

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Habib Akewusola 02 July 2012

HELLO MR WILLIAMS....... i guess we share the rhythm in our poems....... you are on the right path...... you need no teacher keep reading other poets works and you automatically adjust your style....... i love this

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Valerie Dohren 02 July 2012

Lovely poem - you may like to read mine entitled Sunrise.

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Tammie Aimson 02 July 2012

this is vey good, i really like it. x

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Theo Williams

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