Tuesday, January 26, 2010

You Are My Soul........ Comments

Rating: 5.0

You are my soul that gives me a light in to my heart
You shine my way to bring me back from darkness
I found my love entwined with yours in many ways
Now, I want you and aching to be near you
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Ravi Sathasivam
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Marieta Maglas 29 January 2010

I found my love entwined with yours in many ways Nice lyric poem. 10/10

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Chitra - 27 January 2010

the essence of life = soul..well written

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 27 January 2010

your love fotthe other soul shows in every line...great poem sir

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Anju Addanki 27 January 2010

its written in a very nice and subtle way.

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Lady Grace 27 January 2010

this is nice..u wrote this in a very nice way...the soul...without an end...it's eternal...

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