Sunday, December 13, 2009

You Are My Soul....... Comments

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You are my soul that gives me a light in to my heart
You shine my way to bring me back from darkness
I found my love entwined with yours in many ways
Now, I want you and aching to be near you
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Ravi Sathasivam
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Seema Chowdhury 01 March 2010

very nice and deep poem. thanks for sharing it with all. take care

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Merna Ibrahim 18 December 2009

I agree with Omar, that you are very romantic! and all your poems are heartfelt! I love this verse'Even, after my death I will continue to love you' Great Job!

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Omar Ibrahim 17 December 2009

you're very romantic! ! that's why your poems are very warm and heart felt! good job!

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Eyan Desir 16 December 2009

Well written piece good job.............

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Catrina Heart 16 December 2009

wow this is such a heart warming piece......vivid and touching! ! !

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Anju Addanki 14 December 2009

a real and true love good write

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Seema Chowdhury 14 December 2009

what comes from the heart touches the heart. lovely poem. thanks for sharing take care

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Meggie Gultiano 14 December 2009

Even, after my death I will continue to love you ............................................... this is a very special line for me..wow, I just love it

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