Thursday, November 24, 2016

You Are My Piece Of Paradise Comments

Rating: 5.0

Once in my life, I fell in love with the beast.
The beast who become my life and my everything.
The beast who gave me the true meaning of love.
The beast who taught me to be strong enough to fight.
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Joezel Jayme
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Chinedu Dike 09 November 2019

A sad story of love told from the inner recesses of the heart. A very passionate work of art. Thanks for sharing.

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 November 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Joecel. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Gaurav Kumar 24 November 2016

It is the best poem I ever read. Please keep writing more lovely poems as it is.

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Joezel Jayme 07 November 2017

Oh thank you.

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