Friday, August 24, 2012

You Are My Night... Comments

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you are my night, my dawn
you are my day
you are god, my universe...
you are my world
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sagar patil.
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Alexandria Angel 30 August 2012

Awww it really shows who much ur in love :)

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Leena Sharma 26 August 2012

You are very spontaneous in thoughts i guess..Well its a good thing, and that is clearly visible through your creations....Class apart!

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Lalit Kumar Deb 25 August 2012

Words have flowed straight from the heart.

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Rupika Alekhya 25 August 2012

Wooow! Simply osum.... All the best..

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Neela Nath Das 24 August 2012

Very earnest. Loved this piece too.

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Poetheart Morgan 24 August 2012

I love this kind of poem. Love forever! Do not miss! Love is always worth it

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sagar patil.

sagar patil.

maharashtra, india
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