Your face lights up my way
Far though it be
Its radiance reaches me
Breaking all chains
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Your face lights up my way Far though it be Its radiance reaches me Breaking all chains Only in loving you I enjoy a freedom- - - - An amazing write about the power of love- - - -'Moon' is symbol of love for all artists and lovers.
In ancient times the Moon was the highest mortal object: above the moon were the perfects spheres, the saints and angels, the throne of God. Below the moon we live in alternating darkness and light, with good and evil both assailing us. But - BUT your poem floods this vexed existence with H-O-P-E in the truth of human love You've made me a believer! ! !
A rich river of romance that shines like the moon...
Wow! Wow! Wonderful! Inspiration at it eloquent best. Well done my friend!
That elevates my soul / And puts to sleep / My inner riot- - - - - - - What beautifully-turned verses! May you always be bathed in light!
A great incarnation of a divine poem through your pen, dear Ma'am in which you adore Beauty, God, Light of wisdom, and celestial beauty. Nicely crafted. Thanks for the sharing. Regards. Subhas
I strive to reach Into the arms of your light With a passion That no darkness can dim. To us this source of light may be God or someone whom we keep so close to our heart! Though the light is shining far away, its brilliance can reach up to our life and make it bright! Indeed, Love is light illuminating all surroundings and dispelling darkness. A very passionate write, so beautifully rendered!
beautiful poem with some hidden elements, I think. moon of earth, or moon of child, or traveller's or Chukar's. then the secret of tide, is that for inner good or evil! one elevates one sleeps. and passion, that is life and fuel to go on... very nice.
Superb! ! ! ! Inspiring and full of hope. Articulate poem, Loved it....
Of all the literature celebrating the passion of love, the final six lines of this poem strike me as powerfully memorable and radiantly beautiful.
I enjoy a freedom A complete freedom That elevates my soul And puts to sleep.... nice presentation. A poem with love through moon has been toychingly portrayed. Thank u dear madam for sharing this gem.
another forceful poem from the pen of a mighty poeteds, good luck
Love is a light that brightens our life. Beautiful poem.
Beauty leads to love, love leads to God, God leads to light, and light leads to beauty. A great poetess like Nosheen Irfan is wel aware of this cycle. It's a great poem.
Only in loving you! ! Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
An endearing poem. Loved it