Saturday, February 10, 2018

You Are My Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your face lights up my way
Far though it be
Its radiance reaches me
Breaking all chains
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Nosheen Irfan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 December 2022

An endearing poem. Loved it

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Bharati Nayak 17 October 2018

Your face lights up my way Far though it be Its radiance reaches me Breaking all chains Only in loving you I enjoy a freedom- - - - An amazing write about the power of love- - - -'Moon' is symbol of love for all artists and lovers.

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Daniel Brick 16 October 2018

In ancient times the Moon was the highest mortal object: above the moon were the perfects spheres, the saints and angels, the throne of God. Below the moon we live in alternating darkness and light, with good and evil both assailing us. But - BUT your poem floods this vexed existence with H-O-P-E in the truth of human love You've made me a believer! ! !

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Now to be entered into my poem list!

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A rich river of romance that shines like the moon...

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Wow! Wow! Wonderful! Inspiration at it eloquent best. Well done my friend!

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Susan Williams 08 May 2018

That elevates my soul / And puts to sleep / My inner riot- - - - - - - What beautifully-turned verses! May you always be bathed in light!

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 24 March 2018

A great incarnation of a divine poem through your pen, dear Ma'am in which you adore Beauty, God, Light of wisdom, and celestial beauty. Nicely crafted. Thanks for the sharing. Regards. Subhas

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Valsa George 20 March 2018

I strive to reach Into the arms of your light With a passion That no darkness can dim. To us this source of light may be God or someone whom we keep so close to our heart! Though the light is shining far away, its brilliance can reach up to our life and make it bright! Indeed, Love is light illuminating all surroundings and dispelling darkness. A very passionate write, so beautifully rendered!

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Muhammad Ali 10 March 2018

beautiful poem with some hidden elements, I think. moon of earth, or moon of child, or traveller's or Chukar's. then the secret of tide, is that for inner good or evil! one elevates one sleeps. and passion, that is life and fuel to go on... very nice.

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M Asim Nehal 01 March 2018

Superb! ! ! ! Inspiring and full of hope. Articulate poem, Loved it....

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Seamus O Brian 26 February 2018

Of all the literature celebrating the passion of love, the final six lines of this poem strike me as powerfully memorable and radiantly beautiful.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 February 2018

I enjoy a freedom A complete freedom That elevates my soul And puts to sleep.... nice presentation. A poem with love through moon has been toychingly portrayed. Thank u dear madam for sharing this gem.

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shakil ahmed 11 February 2018

another forceful poem from the pen of a mighty poeteds, good luck

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Nudershada Cabanes 10 February 2018

Love is a light that brightens our life. Beautiful poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 10 February 2018

Beauty leads to love, love leads to God, God leads to light, and light leads to beauty. A great poetess like Nosheen Irfan is wel aware of this cycle. It's a great poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 February 2018

Only in loving you! ! Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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