You Are My Life........(I Must Have Her-Am Incomplete) Comments

For me the heart of your poem is on impulse I reach to hold you close....you are my fix my healing dose so natural, easy and relate-able

wonderfully penned. nice and honestly sweet lines. very addictive lines to read.... Like it so muchhhh! ! ! !

she is indeed your life...she is the air you need, to breathe....beautiful Saadat...

that's everyone's dream companionship...simply flows!

hmm....we seek the loved one in our solitude and moments of joy......flows well...

Thank you for sharing this poem because it perfectly describes my best friend.

The difficulty in always finding the correct rhymes is a profound challenge for most poets. I admire you for attempting to write basic rhythm and rhyme. I want to encourage you to continue. But you do have a way to go in that regard and it will take time for you to get there. I wish you well. Overall, a solid effort. GW62

hi.. very nice piece emotionally penned....i liked it thanks for sharing: }