Sunday, November 7, 2010

You Are My God! Comments

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You are my god!
You bring light to me.
When life's down,
I smile and think of you.
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Tenzin Norzom
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Afzal Shauq 07 November 2010

In you eyes, I see love You tell me, 'Life is beautiful', Life is just beautiful, When I'm with you good conclusive stanza of the poem//the idea is spritual but done in poetic way sweet way..liked it..thanks for sharing and hope you write more poems too..10/10

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Tenzin Norzom 07 November 2010

Correction = in your eyes

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