Monday, June 24, 2019

You Are My Flute Comments

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You areMy Flute

You are the flute of my mind,
The tune is inherent in my breath,
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Prabir Gayen
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Biswajit Roy 08 June 2020

The flute of my soul reigns supreme, You are as me in me as the song of my soul without mortal verbosity.

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Biswajit Roy 08 June 2020

You are the flute of my mind, The tune is inherent in my breath, Through your love I will make lyric, The lyric will describe the ode of our love

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Michael Walker 28 January 2020

You happen on a good metaphor-the flute-to describe love of another. I like the sound of the flute and of your poem.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 June 2019

You are my flute full with tunefulness, you r the biggest flute one would love to see and hear PPPPPPPPPPPPPPGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG

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