You Are My Drunkenness Comments

Bearing pain in heart you are looking for peace and happiness. 'I am in mud all around I struggle to walk towards your hesitant light.'.. is very aptly said. Congrats.

light is light full inside but hesitancy makes it maze of life

I have a headache, my knees are full of scars I am in mud all around I struggle to walk towards your hesitant light. You are my drunkenness. tony

Hesitant light is thought provoking.... An excellent modern poem of the day!

I found this poem chosen modern poem second time as the poem of the day. Congratulations.

This is a great philosophical poem having a nice theme behind it..

You are my drunkenness... Looks like a tug-of-war between the passion and emotion. Well crafted poem. Congrats on your being at top.

Full of scars! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

'I struggle to walk towards your hesitant light' - The poem ends so beautifully!

You are my drunkenness... I did not sober up, as if I can do that; I don't want to anyway. passion and infatuation. tony

hesitant light- the darkness! march since the genesis as the sage towards the light!

Intensity of emotions and passion are stunning.

You are my drunkenness... I did not sober up, as if I can do that; romance and desire and passion. tony