You Are My Dark Choclate Comments

So tasty to eat; when, love calls. Nice work

you are my dark chocolate sweet thought and good taste in candy.

mmmm, Tastey Write! Very good Vishal! ; -) Kelly.

Mast h.....likd d rymng, styl.... :)

too romantic poem, very audacious in nature, well done

Dark chocolate wrapped with mint spirit leaf...sound a nice romantic combination..what do u think hahaha joking..a very nice and young feel poem to me_Soul

100% cocoa. Here in Brazil we understand well these effects that it causes on us. Very good poet.

I like your dark chocolate But keep your teeth away from it.Red lips will turn into black- It is not good

Not a bad poem. Try writing a five stanza poem along the same lines.