You Are My Candle Comments

Nice poem, use candle light as a symbol of the spirit of human life.

Love your poem! Light symbolic of a revelator. Used in context with the revelation of love is very good! Good write.

Nice poem Lucia, brava...

Your candle could have an everlasting flame.

Wow! cool poem. Such depth Such passion Keep writing.. 10+

You have such depth in your writing for being so young. I too love candles as light/love and you identify with them as well. wonderful writing. Keep going I want to read on........

I also love candles: -) Some nice images, I wonder if you might think of separating the poems ending. it reads like prose.

But who is 'YOU' Lucy! Is it God or a human beau whom you have perhaps surrendered everything! If it is God, you will get pain but expansion of life will give you ecstassy but if it is human, you have to repent one day since they commonly don't know how to keep promise. Thank you to invite me. Well-written poem with passions and sense of freedom you want to enjoy. Write more and live with poetry. 10+(But voting machinary betrays. Keep it in heart.) Apoet Bangla

Very nicely done, Lucia

You started the on a charming note and finally laid the reality down in a sense very touching.......great job with words