Tuesday, July 30, 2013

You Are My Angel Comments

Rating: 4.3

I simply want to cry
I don't know what to think
There are tears in your eyes
It's like we're on the brink
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Gwenevere Cornwell
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Chinedu Dike 10 January 2015

Bliss of love in the heart of hearts well depicted in the poem. It's a lovely piece, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelvin Owusu 01 August 2013

a lovely poem i do agree with adheez the repetition does give each stanza abit of life

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