You Are Mine! Comments

Love without the chains that bind, good luck walking that very fine line, , Andrew 10

I love the soft alliteration and pure assonance of those first four lines, and the change of tone which comes after that, more than once. The seductiveness of ‘delicious balance’ followed by such a balanced line is terrific- and then that strong ending. Thank you

An incredible poem that is “deliciously balanced.” The ‘you” in this poem is the envy of all men.