Tuesday, May 12, 2009

You Are Love Comments

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like the wind blown rain beating against your face
cooling you, soothing you, without leaving a trace.
so is the love that i have for you
and to you my heart will be true.
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2009

you are my foundation and the reason that i exist every time i touch you, and every passionate kiss. you are ' love' in every shape and form and that's how you belong.....so much passin and kindness in each words of poet. it is beating to every tune of love... very good i mquaite impressed....10 read mine miss i miss u.... all drams not come true..mary to marry

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Kranthi Pothineni 14 May 2009

A nice poem on love and its passion. Good one.

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so um, what have you been up to? who stealing yoiure heart. such is only written out of experience. yay you!

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Kesav Easwaran 12 May 2009

good write, Louis...i liked the honesty sincerity and the richness of your love your poem carries inside...thanks...10

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