Saturday, December 17, 2005

You Are Like An Onion Comments

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you are like a onion,
for you always make me cry,
your are the protective clouds,
hiding me like they do the sky,
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Sid John Gardner. 17 December 2005

Like this one.Good read mate. Sid John.

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Liz Munro 17 December 2005

Great depth and emotion in this poem. You hightlight very well the circle in homes and the fear of it continuing. Liz.

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