You Are In My Silence Comments

This is very nice. I have read three of your other poems and this is the best one so far.

This was your first poem posted here, and this could be the best as well. You start the poem with a deadly sentence straightaway-'Cold as death that's what silence means' and then your natural flow begins. It's amazingly eloquent. 'You house my thoughts if I don't talk I paint a smile even as I walk.' Beautiful thoughts!

wow! ! ! its too good.............i loved reading this one.......... its so good that i wanted to read it again......... n i ended up reading it for more than 3 times.... You are in my silence as natural as I breathe Like the stars in the sky and the letters in my sheets You appear in my thoughts in every waking moment I love thinking of you, always, I'll keep silent. thises lines are simply amazing......

wow...you are in my silence... what a wonderful concept, thoughts... You made a magical painting of words... Your piece itself signifies tranquility.. really a nice write...keep on writing, Naid

Silence is sometimes the best speech like yours here....very well painted reticence in love.....submerged and subconscious mind it speaks of...beautiful write

I like the idea of 'i'll keep silent' as refuge, in order to keep you there ' you are in my silence'. Nice words ' when you came all the closed garden gates/ are fulfilled with music the sadness melts'. beautiful..Cristina Teodor

'You are in my silence can't you listen I don't want to think there are things I'm missing It must be magic It might be love' Steal Into Our Silences true love is sweet heartfelt thoughts for those who steal into our thoughts for those who steal into our silences especially in last moments before soft sleep when we wonder how this love beauty creep into our wondrous quiet moments of silences into our lives with wondrous sudden surprise into our hearts with wondrous sudden speed quiet time soft fills with friendship love silences Inspired by ‘You Are In My Silence’ By Naida Supnet. Copyright © Terence George Craddock

silence is amazing because you can get your thoughts straight especailly about love! :)

This is an excellent writing, i like the prose you used, cold as death that's what silence mean'...to me silence is like been inside the inner you with no sound just silence, hearing only your thoughts in a far away state of mind...I like it very good writing.. I have a poem that is one of my very inspire poem, 'My companion' you can you it up in my list, i think i have it there, because i don't have all my work here, but you can see f is there.. Thank you new friend

Very nicely written you words flow and I love the way you emotions run throughtout this poem. Really beautifully written.

[it might be magic/it might be love]- much emotion aroused

HAY NAIDA, TELL ME, WHO IS THIS GEM CALLED NAIDA?

amazing poem :) keep up with the expression of emotion: ]

Nice concept and use of language. It has a good flow - though personally the 4th verse use of the word throb did not sit well for me. Overall a good poem.

Naida! Love the way u express all out...it was cool writing that burn all inner feelings with smokeless trace...i like the stars in sky and words in letter. Thanks for sharing

we could be talking about walking forever in the company of Jeus! thanks for your warm comment on 2 girls. kind regards, john

Very nice poem.. Naida

really mesmerising...

OMG I LOVE THIS ;) ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! *

i absolutely love this, especially these last 2 lines'You appear in my thoughts in every waking moment I love thinking of you, always, I'll keep silent.'' as they echo my thoughts about that special somebody.good job!