Sunday, October 29, 2017

You Are Going Out Of Track Comments

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We advise because you are going out,
You are going out of track from duty,
Responsibility you should understand,
Importance of time you should feel.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Aniruddha Pathak 06 July 2019

Great write and a wise counsel to the erring man. I wonder if God sometimes feels, He made a mistake creating man.

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Pushpendra Patel 01 March 2019

Going out of track is dangerous. We should walk in right path. Greatest happiness we get remaining with God. We search for eternal happiness and we get this. God teaches us righteousness. Thank you very much for sharing this. You are a nice poet. This poem is excellent poem.

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Mihaela Pirjol 31 October 2017

Such a powerful message is delivered in this poem! So sad, and self-destructive is the reality of our times..

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Rini Shibu 29 October 2017

violence and war bring sorrow and pain, do not go out of track, have peace and love.. An inspirational write

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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