We advise because you are going out,
You are going out of track from duty,
Responsibility you should understand,
Importance of time you should feel.
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Going out of track is dangerous. We should walk in right path. Greatest happiness we get remaining with God. We search for eternal happiness and we get this. God teaches us righteousness. Thank you very much for sharing this. You are a nice poet. This poem is excellent poem.
Such a powerful message is delivered in this poem! So sad, and self-destructive is the reality of our times..
violence and war bring sorrow and pain, do not go out of track, have peace and love.. An inspirational write
Great write and a wise counsel to the erring man. I wonder if God sometimes feels, He made a mistake creating man.