Lady, you are fooling
And falsely cooling
It is as good as begging
With sweet words that are really lagging
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~AN EXOTIC~SA.. Excellent! Stop using poetry as pretext? Use nice words in text Poetry may grant you good name But not fooling a person for money to claim!
kirish Shah ok but why only for women, even men are sometimes the same, so use common for both human beings
~AN EXOTIC~SA.. i do agree with dear friend Kirishji..
Have Faith Nice poem Sir but it goes same to the man too Thanks for sharing, sharing is caring
JaiRam Tiwari via Hasmukh Mehta Dignity-Hasmukh Mehta You are fooling people by hasmukh amathalal poemhunter.com You are fooling people - by hasmukh amathalal. Lady, you are fooling And falsely cooling It is as good as begging With sweet words that are really lagging Your intention is... Like · · Share · 10 hours ago · Hasmukh Mehta SO LOVELY a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1
I don't like the message but the rhythm is interesting Linda Bycoskie5 hours ago the message seemed faithless to me and I believe in the human spirit.
nice... every word carry's with it an emotion. that's my 5cent's worth
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It's ok Amber Barfield2 hours ago I heard the rhythm but I don't know what message to receive
Nice details, Jawahar Gupta1 hour ago Many women try to be smart Use their skill as an art
It's ok Amber Barfield2 hours ago I heard the rhythm but I don't know what message to receive Comment 1 Comment+1
interesting read Dustin Robertson2 hours ago I liked it.
I'm Thinking Patricia Rizzo2 hours ago Oddly well written Comment 0
Good Caroline Yarnall2 hours ago Nice job! I enjoyed this a lot.
21 hours ago « Delete » vikash bhatta.. Very nice... Sometime ago I wrote... Poetry is not my begging bowl O you simpleton fool.