Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, March 26, 2014

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Lady, you are fooling
And falsely cooling
It is as good as begging
With sweet words that are really lagging
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 March 2014

21 hours ago « Delete » vikash bhatta.. Very nice... Sometime ago I wrote... Poetry is not my begging bowl O you simpleton fool.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 March 2014

~AN EXOTIC~SA.. Excellent! Stop using poetry as pretext? Use nice words in text Poetry may grant you good name But not fooling a person for money to claim!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 March 2014

kirish Shah ok but why only for women, even men are sometimes the same, so use common for both human beings

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 March 2014

~AN EXOTIC~SA.. i do agree with dear friend Kirishji..

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 March 2014

Have Faith Nice poem Sir but it goes same to the man too Thanks for sharing, sharing is caring

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 March 2014

JaiRam Tiwari via Hasmukh Mehta Dignity-Hasmukh Mehta You are fooling people by hasmukh amathalal poemhunter.com You are fooling people - by hasmukh amathalal. Lady, you are fooling And falsely cooling It is as good as begging With sweet words that are really lagging Your intention is... Like · · Share · 10 hours ago · Hasmukh Mehta SO LOVELY a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 March 2014

I don't like the message but the rhythm is interesting Linda Bycoskie5 hours ago the message seemed faithless to me and I believe in the human spirit.

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Raymond Magabe 26 March 2014

nice... every word carry's with it an emotion. that's my 5cent's worth

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 March 2014

Jennifer Jumuad likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome jenni a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 March 2014

It's ok Amber Barfield2 hours ago I heard the rhythm but I don't know what message to receive

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 March 2014

Nice details, Jawahar Gupta1 hour ago Many women try to be smart Use their skill as an art

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 March 2014

It's ok Amber Barfield2 hours ago I heard the rhythm but I don't know what message to receive Comment 1 Comment+1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 March 2014

interesting read Dustin Robertson2 hours ago I liked it.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 March 2014

I'm Thinking Patricia Rizzo2 hours ago Oddly well written Comment 0

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 March 2014

Good Caroline Yarnall2 hours ago Nice job! I enjoyed this a lot.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 March 2014

Lady, you are fooling And falsely cooling

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