You Are Extremely Hot (English Sonnet) Comments

[final] 'Spellbound' in line 12 is another trochee. There are more, but I have no more time. Keep writing. You are better than many on this website.

[6] In the last line, the first word, 'nothing'. should be an iamb, but it is a trochee. The first syllable is stressed, and the second syllable is unstressed. This is not the only example in the poem where this happens.

[5] An iamb is a stressed syllable followed by an unstressed syllable. that needs to be the pattern throughout the poem. The first syllable of every line needs to be unstressed, and the next syllable stressed, etc.

[4] Although your syllable count is for the most part correct, much of the poem is not iambic.

[3] You DO, however, have the correct rhyme pattern for the English sonnet. Congratulations.

[2] Line 8 does not make sense in English. The last word should be 'portray', but then you would not have a true rhyme with line 6.

[1] This is NOT a true English sonnet, as English sonnets are written in iambic pentameter, with ten syllables per line. Line 4 has an extra syllable.