Friday, June 19, 2009

You Are Dancing Comments

Rating: 4.5

When the adrenalin creeps;
And the knees don’t creek.
They say you are dancing.
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Nikunj Sharma
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Wonderful poem about dancing. 'When the night is young and tunes are unsung' just makes me want to dance. And as you say, there is the adrenalin and letting go of worries and people smiling. You have captured the spirit of the dance so well Nikunj. Well done!

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Ken E Hall 27 June 2009

A nice twist to the dancing swing, , , you have joined the mind with relaxation of dance acca adrenalin, perfect.Being a dancer I feel your poem++++10 regards uavanice1

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rarely do i read about this, it was fun reading.. i like it as i also love to dance.. :) nice one.. :)

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Christina Phan 25 June 2009

Yea its all true I luv to dance its fun another great one 10+

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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 June 2009

'When the kite soars high; In the blue sky; When you think; You can. In yourself see a real man; They say you are dancing.' Marvelous write, love with 10+

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Elsa Bennett 19 June 2009

Truly wonderful poem! Excellent ideas in it... Thankyou.

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