Wednesday, May 19, 2010

You Are Confused Comments

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You are confused,
i understand,
ill give you some time,
no helping hand.
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Alaric Darcy
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zeo little bird 23 May 2010

i like this poem alot it feels as if you are actually talking to me :)

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Kesav Easwaran 20 May 2010

that's a good invite...a decent promise too nice compostion Alaric...simple yet sweet natural rhyming scheme...10

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Alaric Darcy

Alaric Darcy

birmingham england
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