Tuesday, May 31, 2016

You Are Children Comments

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You are children you are sweet
From my true heart I shall greet.
Meet me, oh dears meet me, meet,
Love you all people do not cheat.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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M Asim Nehal 11 June 2016

Very rhythmic poem on beloved children's love and naughty acts.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 06 June 2016

Advice to children beautifully presented.

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Akhtar Jawad 05 June 2016

A poem full of music and thoughts that pour on the heart of a reader like a fine mid rain.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 June 2016

Do not cheat! ! Nice advice. Thanks for sharing.

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B.m. Biswas 01 June 2016

Lively....a soothing poem...smiling rhymed...thanks.

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Kelly Kurt 01 June 2016

Children are pure joy, as is your poem

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Rajnish Manga 31 May 2016

Thanks for sharing a wonderful poem on 'Children's Day' which goes on to show the extent of concern for a balanced growth of our children in the society. Extremely thoughtful and adorable. Small you each you are you do crawl Fight you not make future bright,

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 31 May 2016

Excellent stuff, considering the day's significance. Children you do not go far at night, Remain with mothers you do right. Children facing all kinds of threats coming in night form, need to be protected from, all good hearted mothers. Very pertinent and poignant poem. Thanks for sharing.X

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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