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The repetition serves this poem well - it gives the meaning an extra ring.

Interestin write my friend

a beatifully written poem! very true when it comes to feelings. I enjoyed it very much! -Layla

I normally run a mile from love poems - but I actually really like this one.

Beautiful ways of loving words that sway down the page

so you put the real feelings and truth of yours through this poem really nice thanks