Tuesday, December 29, 2009

You Are Beautiful Comments

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You are very pretty
and the sun rising over the horizon
loves you,
while his red rays folds open.
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Gert Strydom
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Nikunj Sharma 29 December 2009

this is a wonderful piece, simple in construction, grand in meaning. many parallels can be drawn here with real life experiences. you have captured small features here that beautify a person, feelings are strong and the images are crstal clear. I hope the person for whom you have written this reads it and hugs you...wow is the word...can u pls read my poem called AFTER and A JANUARY...

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 29 December 2009

very imaginative! ..... artistic... very artistic!

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Gert Strydom

Gert Strydom

Johannesburg, South Africa
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