You Are Astounding! ! ! ! ! ! Comments
I just want to feel your presence,
I wanna see that incontrovertible innocence..
in your eyes that makes me so COMPLETE,
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The Word COMPLETE has got a lot of meanings...great work chap...
Dear Neha, Outstanding I would say for You are astounding, , , , Short & sweet....loved very much...keep it up dear! ! -geets
wow...he certainly must be astounding..... wonderfully expressed friend, khup avadlee tujhi poem, thanks
astounding heart beat...can hear its symphony, sweet...expressive lovely write, Neha...10
Neha... u write so amazingly impressive, with simplicity of words and rhythmic lines.. this one is so musical dat even your reference to ur heartbeats seems like some music.
When the beat stops...........we die.Good rhythm Neha!
...in your eyes that makes me so COMPLETE... sounds so romantic! Thanks for sharing your lovely thoughts...
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7/20/2025 10:47:25 PM # 1.0.0
Unique experience of love; quite poetic