Wednesday, December 6, 2006

You Are All This Comments

Rating: 5.0

You are my prize posession,
my compulsive obsession,
the culmination of my expression,
what more can I say...
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Arti Chopra
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V P Mahur 02 March 2014

Dear Arti Mam This one is very beautiful from a beautiful mind Thanks Plz visit my page to read my poems and make comments

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Kee Thampi 06 December 2006

I cherish your love untold, your eyes so true and bold, your heart which beats for me.. with a constrict writes and makes a great feek You are my prize posession, my compulsive obsession,

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 06 December 2006

Arti>>>>Likke this Rhyme pattern...you don't see it too often anymore...it has a lyrical flounce ti it, quite melodious, indeed....Nice tight, crisp structure, employs a smooth flux throughout....Fine crafting, Sir! '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''F.j. R.

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