Thursday, October 3, 2019

Youare- - - Comments

Rating: 5.0

You are my dot and line
You are my bracket and alphabet
You are my one liner and phrase
You are my word and sentence
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Bharati Nayak
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Edward Kofi Louis 24 December 2019

You are my song and poem! ! All in all; Muse of righteous morals. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Glen Kappy 18 October 2019

Hey, Bharati. After a while I’m visiting again the half dozen or so poets I keep tabs on, you being one of them. I like the concept of this one, and the closing line did not disappoint. -Glen

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Mahtab Bangalee 17 October 2019

Yes you are yes o poem you are my dot and line to FULL STOP Yes you are O POEM.........///

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Bharati Nayak 18 October 2019

Thank you- - Thank you poet Mahatab Bangalee for such a wonderful comment.

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Aniruddha Pathak 13 October 2019

But never a full stop..., a point made very emphatically, enjoyed reading it.

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Bharati Nayak 18 October 2019

Thanks a lot Aniruddha Pathakji for your kind visit to my poems and your inspiring comments.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 October 2019

ur and my works are side by side kumara ji praises all all his while but me has sadly set aside BLOCKED ATHIEST AS PER HIM I BE

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Bharati Nayak 18 October 2019

Thank you Poet Poet for inspiring me through your comments.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 October 2019

What a brilliant poem you have submitted here dear madam, full of meaning and inspirations......You are dot and line.....You are Hiphen and semicolon / But never ever a Full Stop. A great philosophical poem is well executed. Thanks for sharing.

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Bharati Nayak 04 October 2019

My hearty thanks Sir Kumarmani Mahakul for your wonderful comment on my poem.

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Chinedu Dike 03 October 2019

A free flight of creativity on winged imagination. A witty creation written in persuasive diction with artistic brilliance. Thanks for sharing, Bharati.

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Bharati Nayak 03 October 2019

Many many thanks Chinedu Dike for your wonderful comment.It is always a pleasure to read your comments.You were first to comment on my first poem on Poem Hunter.Keep writing and keep inspiring.

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Indira Renganathan 03 October 2019

Very much an enjoyable poem...last line takes the poem to the top....congratulations Bharati...full mark

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Bharati Nayak 03 October 2019

My humble thanks Madam Indira Renganathan for kindly reading my poem and giving your valuable feedback.

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Kostas Lagos 03 October 2019

I always enjoy reading your poems Bharati! 10!

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Bharati Nayak 03 October 2019

Many thanks Kostas Lagos for reading my poem and such appreciation.Poem Hunter Site is a lovely place because of wonderful people like you.

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