You are my dot and line
You are my bracket and alphabet
You are my one liner and phrase
You are my word and sentence
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Hey, Bharati. After a while I’m visiting again the half dozen or so poets I keep tabs on, you being one of them. I like the concept of this one, and the closing line did not disappoint. -Glen
Yes you are yes o poem you are my dot and line to FULL STOP Yes you are O POEM.........///
Thank you- - Thank you poet Mahatab Bangalee for such a wonderful comment.
But never a full stop..., a point made very emphatically, enjoyed reading it.
Thanks a lot Aniruddha Pathakji for your kind visit to my poems and your inspiring comments.
ur and my works are side by side kumara ji praises all all his while but me has sadly set aside BLOCKED ATHIEST AS PER HIM I BE
What a brilliant poem you have submitted here dear madam, full of meaning and inspirations......You are dot and line.....You are Hiphen and semicolon / But never ever a Full Stop. A great philosophical poem is well executed. Thanks for sharing.
My hearty thanks Sir Kumarmani Mahakul for your wonderful comment on my poem.
A free flight of creativity on winged imagination. A witty creation written in persuasive diction with artistic brilliance. Thanks for sharing, Bharati.
Many many thanks Chinedu Dike for your wonderful comment.It is always a pleasure to read your comments.You were first to comment on my first poem on Poem Hunter.Keep writing and keep inspiring.
Very much an enjoyable poem...last line takes the poem to the top....congratulations Bharati...full mark
My humble thanks Madam Indira Renganathan for kindly reading my poem and giving your valuable feedback.
Many thanks Kostas Lagos for reading my poem and such appreciation.Poem Hunter Site is a lovely place because of wonderful people like you.
You are my song and poem! ! All in all; Muse of righteous morals. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.