Wednesday, September 18, 2013

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my breath I breathe
my brain when I think

my voice when I speak
the beat of my heart
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Heather Burns
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Sallam Yassin 20 September 2013

the poetry in one word there's a big love between you and poetry Simple you breathe it

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Unwritten Soul 19 September 2013

Ah again you killed it very nice...just simple but elegant! _Soul

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Noreen Carden 19 September 2013

Hello Heather what a beautiful poem total love in every syllable well done

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Sekharan Pookkat 19 September 2013

I really liked it and enjoyed well

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 19 September 2013

What the rhythm beautiful your drops are deep ocean I sunk

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Harindhar Reddy 19 September 2013

A smooth flow of thoughts which has power impress anyone. Well versed verse by you ma'am

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Dave Walker 19 September 2013

A wonderful little poem, really like it. So much said in so few words.

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Marvin Brato 19 September 2013

Indeed, very truthful sentiments!

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