Saturday, July 1, 2017

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You are my heart's home,
You are those reborn rays of light,
Even amidst darkness that roam.
You are the fragrant filled breath,
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NAYANIKA DEY
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Dr Antony Theodore 11 July 2017

If you are a sin I'd love to be a sinner, my untamed desires, For whom I'd strip My instincts bare. Beautiful poem going to bring the reader to eros. Thank you for this fine and delicate love poem. tony

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Nayanika Dey 12 July 2017

Tons of thanks for such words of appraisal!

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Sankar Sarkar 04 July 2017

poetic idea is as lofty, idealistic and exquisite as pure feelings which make the readers love YOU whom the poet invokes with sincere and devoted heart; here not only poet himself but all long for this YOU as a manifestation of self existence that pervades the flavor of love as spirit of creation in this poem.....thanks a lot for sharing Nayanika!

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Nayanika Dey 12 July 2017

Immense thanks! It means a lot!

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Jazib Kamalvi 04 July 2017

Nice love poem. I impressed much. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Nayanika Dey 04 July 2017

Thank you so much! sure I will.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 July 2017

He is God he can only be blissful spark in human heart. He remains in mind reflecting beautiful rays. This is very nice and interesting poem shared here on love topic....10

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Nayanika Dey 04 July 2017

Tons of thanks to you for such words of appraisal!

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NAYANIKA DEY

NAYANIKA DEY

Durgapur, West Bengal, India
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