Monday, March 19, 2012

You Are......... Comments

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You are a star....
Yes you are...

Even if you don't
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Siyabonga A Nxumalo
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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 21 April 2012

This is so heart warming i must say....a very rich poem with a message of hope....keep it up.... I have a poem like that....They are not long the dark hours of the night....a Villanella....please read and leave a comment/criticism.....thanks for sharing

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Vipins Puthooran 16 April 2012

It consoles a weeping child/ perfect poetry! ! ! !

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Hans Vr 05 April 2012

Great poem. I agree so much. All of us are stars. Excellent poem full of hope and inspiration, my brother. Deep inside there is a light and all of us have it. We just have to look for it and let it shine (please read my poem, Y.. the little light)

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Pheko Motaung 25 March 2012

A magnificent inspiring poem! You really worked wonders with this outstanding poem.Congratulations and well done.

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Yho! .. Bra this is so wonderful bro, I am going to try and share it with as many people I can, simple words being influencial to ones heart and mind, this signifies your ability to motivate people out the with such strong and deep words.. Eish So wonderful The_African_Son

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Dead Leaf 24 March 2012

Never forget... You can't eat honey Without fighting bees. YOU ARE A STAR! really great lines... ...hey really great, brother....... really inspiring....

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Jinal Oswal 21 March 2012

Wow! ! wonderful ending... Never forget... You can't eat honey Without fighting bees. YOU ARE A STAR! Nice poem :) Keep writing brother...

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Eric Cockrell 20 March 2012

you have the healing touch!

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