Saturday, June 23, 2007

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I wonder can you hear me.
I thought of you today.
For a long time.
Sometimes I come upon myself just standing,
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Margaret Ann Newcomb
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Marci Made 30 June 2007

this is a beautiful poem. Loneliness especially after loss of a loved one in one way or another, leaves us confused and dazed and uncertain of what step to take next. Fearful of failure....You have expressed alot of raw emotion here and you have done it well, , , , , , , , , marci. :)

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Not a member No 4 23 June 2007

Atmospheric. Well composed and certainly makes the situation clear. Good writing.

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Margaret Ann Newcomb

Margaret Ann Newcomb

Whidby Island, WA
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