Tuesday, December 8, 2009

You And Me And Our Pals Comments

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It was a time we played together
You and me and our peer pals.
I waited, desperate in the sterile afternoons
To hear the trilling bell of your old bicycle
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J T Jayasingh
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 09 December 2009

wow... nice flashbacks.... very good....

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Dinesh Mukherji 09 December 2009

yet such talks are coming reality, and the progress you can see. your poem is good like words.

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Sandhya S N 09 December 2009

I saw your friend both at childhood and now. Your words are very powerful in picturing the story You are very lucky, that you could recall those ages without any fade hatsoff to you and your friend! both being fighting for injustice congrats and regards sandhya

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