You And Me Comments
You were born with a cry
I too cried, may be with pain
Than to join voice with you
A great relief, with a sigh
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I relived my childhood and youth with you I discovered courage with you I learnt to stand by you I learnt to forgive and forget I sang and danced to tunes of life I enjoyed the warmth of clasped hands I understood life with you. superb.....so musical and as soft.... as gosamer as the cotton clouds high up in the simlas...we both are joined together in seeing daughters witha special love i did one one daughter day too...simply 'daughters' i am a great fan of such straight forward simple and erudite poetry...that straight away touches your heart without the great poetic game of hide and seek ten to your poem and cheers to you
well this is a beautiful poem...a great gift for your daughter lovely write
the love of a mother to her children is devotional...unconditional...submittive...beautiful write that brings out all the essense of the love thus said...10 for you, Vidi...
what an emotional write... filled with love and affection to the brim
a very nice expressed tribute to daughter...nice... deserves a 10 Ency Bearis
Great love of a parent to his/her daughter showed so well in this composition. welcome back Vidi. a 10 for this tribute.
lovely tribute from a loving mother to her daughter. nice to see you again on ph. pl read my poem on the same theme CyCLE OF LIFE. 10 mamta
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7/21/2025 6:05:37 PM # 1.0.0
a loving write to a affectionate daughter.......beautifully crafted........