You And Me Comments
You and me,
Passed thirty years and three,
Through Spring and Winter, rain and shine,
Enjoyed our life, barely with a hint of a whine.
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A most wonderful and exemplary poem. So sweet and real and at the same time, so filled with true and sincere happiness, so hard to find. Written with such sincerity, love and heart, the poem describes the type of love and life that so many would love to have but have not. What a joyful and unforgettable poem! Thank you so much!
Liked the recurring words in the poem. It gave emphasis on the beautiful and enduring love. The flow and rhyme are just wonderful. So tenderly and lovingly penned. Five Stars! ! !
A wonderful tribute and a timeless gift to a wonderful woman who never ceases to to love, care and respect the man whom she chose to be with in sickness and in health. A beautiful story of love embedded with the wonderful attributes which make a strong relationship that can conquer whatever storms in life.
Built our nest with endless zest Hardly caring about taking rest Great lines about auniversal truth We are destind to make our nest Without expecting anything in return
Dear Poet @Suresh Kumar Ek, Thank you so much for reading my poem and leaving an appreciative comment. I am much inspired.
You and me Walking on the paths of life Suffer together Smile together Very high poem There is a lot to learn from you.10++ আমি আপনার কবিতা দ্বারা খুব মুগ্ধ হয়েছিল। আমি প্রার্থনা করি যে আপনার কলম সর্বদা চলুক।.
@Dr Shakira Nandini, Thank you for visiting my page and leaving a kind comment. Special thanks for writing the last line in Bangla, which touched me deeply. I am much inspired by your appreciative comment and the generous rating of the poem. Why are you not writing any more, of late?
@Ravinder Soni, Thank you for visiting my page and reading the poem. Much inspired by your appreciative comment.
A wonderful poem of you building your life with your wife and family.
Thank you Jennifer Birchall, for reading and commenting on one of my old poems here. The poem was written more than five years ago, appreciating my wife and our loving togetherness, now for about 39 years.
Nice, hope it could show your sincere attention, to your wife.
Thanks for stopping by, to read the poem and leave a kind comment here, @Hassan Hayati.
i love the Poet's Notes! so poetic! ! and informative! ! now to read the poem. [if i add all the years i've been married [to four wives, one at a time], it about totals 30 years! ! ! i like barely here: barely with a hint of a whine. .............honesty is (sometimes) important! and hardly and much and not and much [again! ] in (some) succeeding stanzas. Wearing unpleasant crowns of thorns.................so far i've not worn any crown of thorns which was ....................................................................................pleasant! ! ! to MyPoemList bri :)
Dear Bri Edwards, Thanks for taking this poem to your 'MyPoemList'. Thanks for apprecdiating the 'Poet's Notes' too.
I have done away with that 'wearing unpleasant crown of thorns'! :) Edited the second last stanza slightly. Hope it meets your hearty acceptance now. :)
This is a lovely poem of love and togetherness and appreciation, a wonderful write.
Much inspired by this generous appreciation. Thank you, @Sarah Persson. I've just read your wonderful poem- 'Unrevealing' and left my comment there.
I which every husband would take the time to appreciate his wife for what she has done during their journey. Thank you dear poet for sharing.
Thank you too, @Rosie Bourget, for reading the poem and leaving a kind comment here. Happy writing!
Thank you, @Abduhoo Salamath for reading the poem and leaving a comment here. Much inspired.
Awesome gesture you are the real macho, u r really manly, the one who loves his better half you are the real human being on earth, thanks for the wonderful drop dear poet
Overwhelmed by your kind words! Thank you, dear poet @V.M.Saraswathy Munuswamy.
the years between 'you and me' all flows softly back into the words of a noble soul.
Thanks for your kind reading and appreciation, @Anne Yun. Much obliged. I've just read your lovely poem-'In The Long Night Of Oblivion' and left a comment there.
what a lovely poem to be written for your wife and days you spent together nice lines
Thanks for reading the poem, @Asma Zenjali. Your kind words are indeed very inspiring.
Your poem is pleasant and shows much appreciation for you wife, and family.
Thank you, @Brenda Harris, for reading the poem and leaving a kind comment here. I've just read your lovely poem 'Fallen Angel' and left a comment there.
Oh so sweet! Congratulation for the years that you'd share with yr wife. May the years ahead filled with much joy and happiness. Not many couples had chance to survived the test. Thanks for sharing
Thanks to you too, @Niken Kusuma Wardani, for leaving your thoughtful appreciation here, after reading the poem. Much inspired by your kind words.
If only everyone could take a moment to look at their lives and realize that they did not get there by themselves. We tend to show disregard to those who made our lives worthwhile without stopping for a moment to just say thank you. The dedication is a wonderful gesture of respect, love and appreciation. Beautifully written.
Your precious appreciation of the poem is so inspiring to me, thank you @Maria Sharon Moemise. I've just read your poem 'I am'- where you have emphatically defined yourself.
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7/26/2025 1:02:44 AM # 1.0.0
So heartfelt, warming and engaging a most pleasant poem to read and receive much joy from. A poem that presents love unashamedly with a last verse that touches a reader. Thank you sir for sharing your memories of love and long may they continue in your poetry that shines. Five worthy stars and gratefully bestowed. I wish you well and not forgetting the loved one and loved ones around you. Take care.