Saturday, January 14, 2012

You And Me Comments

Rating: 2.5

I started on a journey alone, when you came along
Hi, how are you, you say, as I pretend to look away
We fought and talked, at times laughed a lot
Two of us, we were a problem child,
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Jasbir Chatterjee 06 March 2012

meeting, parting, and meeting again...it's like swinging on a pendulum of emotions...hard to control for a poet...very nice poem...read my poem, the end or a beginning...you would understand it better, I am sure

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 16 January 2012

i like this poem as you are true with it. keep growing. lots of love. abhimanyu kumar.s

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Asif Andalib 14 January 2012

It's a nice romantic love-story described with your poetic style! Keep poeting!

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