Monday, January 11, 2016

You And Me Comments

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you looked at me and you saw a future,
a beautiful life of joy and wonder.
i looked at you and i saw torture,
greamy evenings with words of murder.
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Antonio Williams
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Prabhata Kumar Sahoo 03 July 2017

I saw torture- you saw my fears: only shy lovers can understand.very nice.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 May 2017

Forever! ! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Antonio Williams 03 July 2017

Thank you

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Antonio Williams 28 March 2016

Thanks Dr. tony Brahmin for your time to read my poems and for your comment!

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 March 2016

you looked at me and you saw my fears and i knocked at your opened door, and you welcomed a restless soul, i looked at you and i saw your worth.- - fear, acceptance, sense of worth. so many points in this beautiful poem. thank you dear poet. tony

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